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 TL;DR: I'd love the blessing from pycon.org (should I rather contact the PSF for this matter?) to contact various communities and interview them, asking questions like the ones I've collected in [1].
-I've "started" the blog and summarized my will in the about page on [2]. Would it be possible to have a domain name to use, maybe something like communities.pycon.org? or pycon.org/communties?
+I've "started" the blog and summarized my will in the about page on [2]. How could/should this be done? Should I apply for a sub-domain like communities.pycon.org?
 
 
 A future addition to this blog would be to implement/adapt the domesday [3] project used at http://mozillians.org. It could be like a djangopeople.net, but for all the python communities, each user being tagged with communities they're member of and projects they're contributing to, making it dead simple to get in touch with fellow members/contributors, and for leaders to contact/call for help/...
 
 
-I'm open to any comment and feedback, so please fire !
+I'm open to any comment and feedback, so please fire!
 
 Best regards