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-Philosophy is the discipline that studies major and universal questions, including existence, cognition, values, reason, and language. It encompasses a vast number of subjects and problems, from ethics and politicians to metaphysics and logic. Here are the main nuances of philosophy: 
+Philosophy is the discipline that studies major and universal questions, including existence, knowledge, values, mind, and language. It covers a vast number of topics and issues, ranging from ethics and politicians to metaphysics and logic. Here are principal aspects of philosophy: 
  
 1. Definition of Philosophy 
-Philosophy comes from the Greek words "philos" (love) and "sophia" (wisdom). It is zeal to realize and make sense of the world around us and our place in it. 
+Philosophy comes from the Greek words "philos" (love) and "sophia" (wisdom). It is zeal to understand and make sense of the world around us and our place in it. 
  
 2. The Main branches of philosophy 
-- Ontology research of the essence of being and existence. 
+- Ontology the study of the essence of being and existence. 
 - Epistemology the study of the nature and limits of knowledge. 
 - Ethics the analysis of moral principles and concepts of good and evil. 
-- Logic research of the forms and principles of correct thinking. 
+- Logic the study of the forms and principles of correct thinking. 
 - Political philosophy the study of questions of power, justice and the state. 
  
-3. Notable Philosophers 
-Throughout the history of philosophy, almost many thinkers have made weighty contributions to this science. Some of the most recognizable include: 
+3. Famous Philosophers 
+During the history of philosophy, almost many thinkers have made meaningful contributions to this science. Some of the most famous include: 
 - Socrates, considered the progenitor of Western philosophy. 
 - Plato, a student of Socrates, developed the doctrine of forms. 
-- Aristotle, the creator of logic and a large number of scientific fields. 
-- Immanuel Kant, known for his own <a href=https://thephilosopher.net/>Philosophy</a> critical philosophy and work on moral issues. 
+- Aristotle, the creator of logic and many of scientific fields. 
+- Immanuel Kant, known for his <a href=https://thephilosopher.net/joyce/>James Joyce</a> critical philosophy and work on moral issues. 
  
 4. The Relevance of Philosophy in the Modern World 
-Philosophy remains urgent in the modern world because it helps people to understand complex social and moral issues, also develops critical thinking. It affects the legal system, politicians, and various fields of science. 
+Philosophy remains urgent in the modern world since enables people to understand difficult social and ethical issues, and also develops critical thinking. It influences the legal system, politicians, and different fields of science. 
  
 5. Practical Applications of Philosophy 
  
-Philosophical ideas enter everyday life. Ethical reflection helps people do the correct thing in difficult situations, and philosophical analysis contributes to greatest understanding of issues related to technology, art, and social justice. 
+Philosophical ideas penetrate everyday life. Ethical reflection helps people do the correct thing in difficult situations, and philosophical analysis contributes to greatest understanding of problems related to technology, art, and social justice. 
  
-Philosophy is including an academic discipline, as well as method of thinking assists us to understand life's complexities and make informed choices.
+Philosophy is including an academic discipline, yes and method of thinking that helps us to understand life's complexities and make informed choices.